高二的同学将要参加小高考,部分同学遇到重要考试时会出现一些焦虑症状,假如你是李明,请你用英语给〈〈明天报〉〉的编辑写一封信反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点:

高二的同学将要参加小高考,部分同学遇到重要考试时会出现一些焦虑症状,假如你是李明,请你用英语给〈〈明天报〉〉的编辑写一封信反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点:

焦虑症状

建议

头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等。

1.考前制定好合适的复习计划

2.考试期间正常作息

3. 睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠

其它建议(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意:1.对所给要点,不要简单翻译,要有适当的发挥;

2. 词数: 120。信中已写好的部分,不计入词数;

3.参考词汇:头晕—dizzy(adj.). 复习-review(vt.) 食欲-appetite (n.)

Dear editor

I’m Li Ming of Senior One Xiangshui High School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms (症状) of anxiety among us students before exams. __________________________________________________________________________________

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Li Ming


参考答案


Dear editor I’m Li Ming of Senior One Xiangshui High School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.It is not surprising that many students feel nervous before they take an important examination. Some of us will feel dizzy while others feel tired and are not energetic any more. Some will suffer from lack of sleep and even lose the appetite. All these symptoms are caused by the pressure of the examination and definitely have a bad effect on our studies.How to get rid of them? My suggestions are as follows. For one thing we should make a proper plan for reviewing all the lessons which can save us time. For another thing we should have a good rest during the examinations otherwise we should feel exhausted. Last but not least if you want to have enough sleep you can take a hot bath or drink some hot milk before you go to the bed. I think these measures are good for your sleep.In addition we can communicate with our parents teacher or friends a bit more. They can give us a lot of valuable suggestions. Of course you can also do some exercises to keep fit.Li Ming

分 析:
本文的属于提纲类写作,是关于考试焦虑症的相关内容,话题切合考生实际,与考生的生活非常贴近,考生有话可说,有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的,要求考生有较强的整合能力,在写作时充分利用连接词,高级句型和词汇,如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语,以使文章的层次更高。首先应该用合适的连接词把考试焦虑症的症状写清楚,在发表个人建议的时候,可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语suffer from遭受;have a bad effect on对。。有坏影响;For another thing另外一方面;In addition此外;communicate with与。。进行交流;It is not surprising that many students feel nervous before they take an important examination.这个句子it做形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式;
考点:
提纲类作文

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