看答案网有一段英文看看有没有时态语法错误我有一段英文是我的自我介绍请帮忙看看有没有时态和语法的错误,如果有帮我改一下再发上来,我就这么多分全给你了谢谢了.mynameisXX,Iam22yearsold,bo
有一段英文看看有没有时态语法错误
我有一段英文是我的自我介绍 请帮忙看看有没有时态和语法的错误,如果有帮我改一下再发上来,我就这么多分全给你了谢谢了.
my name is XX ,I am 22 years old ,born in Tianjin ,I am a Junior student at Hubei University Of Automotive Technology My major is Vehicle Engineering,I like playing football,table tennis,badminton,singing.I like sports Sweating after feeling really is extremely beautiful.My favorite color is blue,because it is the color of the sky and the sea the color of an inclusive world.I guess you may be interested in why I choose this job.I would like to tell you that this job is one of my lifelong goals,so when i'm during zhe elementry school My classmate's father was a pilot At that time I thought this is a very mysterious work and Most people can not complete this work When I saw you online recruitment time brought back memories of my childhood Also led me to a very pressing to attend the interview so This is really a great honor to have this opportunity If I have the opportunity to be hired,then I think I will be able to be trained in their work and realize their own value.thank you
我有一段英文是我的自我介绍 请帮忙看看有没有时态和语法的错误,如果有帮我改一下再发上来,我就这么多分全给你了谢谢了.
my name is XX ,I am 22 years old ,born in Tianjin ,I am a Junior student at Hubei University Of Automotive Technology My major is Vehicle Engineering,I like playing football,table tennis,badminton,singing.I like sports Sweating after feeling really is extremely beautiful.My favorite color is blue,because it is the color of the sky and the sea the color of an inclusive world.I guess you may be interested in why I choose this job.I would like to tell you that this job is one of my lifelong goals,so when i'm during zhe elementry school My classmate's father was a pilot At that time I thought this is a very mysterious work and Most people can not complete this work When I saw you online recruitment time brought back memories of my childhood Also led me to a very pressing to attend the interview so This is really a great honor to have this opportunity If I have the opportunity to be hired,then I think I will be able to be trained in their work and realize their own value.thank you
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看在老乡份上,帮你改了很多.你自己看看.
my name is XX ,I am 22 years old ,born in Tianjin ,I am a Junior student at Hubei University Of Automotive Technology.My major is Vehicle Engineering.I like playing football,table tennis,and badminton.I also like singing.To me,throwing some sweats after the sports activities really feels great.My favorite color is blue,because it is the color of the sky and the sea,thus it is the color that represents the entire world.I guess you may be interested to know why I choose this job.I would like to tell you that this job has always been my dream job,since I was a primary school student.At that time,one of my classmate's father was a pilot.To me,this is the most mysterious work in the world and it was not something that everyone could do.
The moment I saw you online recruitment,my memory kept flashing back,which makes me so keen to attend such an interview.
It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to talk to you.If I get the job in the end,my dream will finally come true and I can be trained as a pilot and realize the true value of being a excellent pilot.
my name is XX ,I am 22 years old ,born in Tianjin ,I am a Junior student at Hubei University Of Automotive Technology.My major is Vehicle Engineering.I like playing football,table tennis,and badminton.I also like singing.To me,throwing some sweats after the sports activities really feels great.My favorite color is blue,because it is the color of the sky and the sea,thus it is the color that represents the entire world.I guess you may be interested to know why I choose this job.I would like to tell you that this job has always been my dream job,since I was a primary school student.At that time,one of my classmate's father was a pilot.To me,this is the most mysterious work in the world and it was not something that everyone could do.
The moment I saw you online recruitment,my memory kept flashing back,which makes me so keen to attend such an interview.
It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to talk to you.If I get the job in the end,my dream will finally come true and I can be trained as a pilot and realize the true value of being a excellent pilot.
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