你经常去动物园上星期日你和你的朋友程程去看动物;她比你矮但比你强壮所以她骑自行车带你去.你们在那里玩得很高兴看了许多动物买了一些东西….

I often go to the zoo on the weekend. Last Sunday I went to the zoo with my friend Chengcheng. We went their by bike. Chengcheng is shorter but stronger than me. So he rode the bike. There were many people in the zoo. We saw many kinds of animals. Some of them are lovely. But some of them are frightened. We bought something too. The time passed so fast we left the zoo at 1 PM. We were so happy today.

这篇短文要求我们根据提示写出上周去动物园的时。我们在写作时要注意：1.主语是是第一人称，谈上周去动物园的事用一般过去时。 2. 要把提示的内容全部写上，可以适当地增加一些内容。3.要避免句式的单一。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣题目要求，谈了上周日去动物园的经过。2.文章句式不单一，有There be句型：There were many people in the zoo. 有比较级：Chengcheng is shorter but stronger than me.